Looks much better. A few things:
1) Headtube length- You run your saddle 10mm lower than I do, so your torso is still slightly longer than mine. As such, I believe you are likely to run a 50-60mm stem based on your body measurements provided in your first post. Now the issue is whether your headtube is too tall. If you run a flat bar, it will probably be pretty close with no spacers. If you run a riser (I run a 25mm Enve M6 bar) it will likely be too tall (keep in mind I like my bars higher than most). I would suggest given your lower saddle height having the headtube reduced to 135mm, which will give you flexibility in bar height. Keep in mind, when the fork is sagged, the reach and effective toptube length will both grow by about 7-10mm.
2) Tire size- This is going to be important for your chainstay length. For a hardtail that is not raced, I really like running 2.6 tires. The issue with this becomes that for a steel frame, with short chainstays you can run into clearance problems. To run 430mm stays with a 2.6 most builders will use something like a flat stay section. Neuhaus is able to avoid the issue because of their use of 3d printed lugs. Your builder should have discussed this issue with you. If not, I would be concerned.
3) Seat Tube Angle- Much better. Again, keep in mind, the numbers in your drawing are unsagged, so will steepen to about 75.5 sagged. This is fine for climbing, but if you do a lot of riding on flat terrain or shallow fire road climbs, may put too much weight on your hands.
4) Trail- Trail is a number calculated using head angle, wheel size, and fork offset. It is a resulting number, not something you adjust.
5) General concerns- I, like some others, have concerns that your builder is either lacking communication or experience. The first design should have never been sent and the builder should have explained that it is near impossible to compare hardtail and full suspension geometry and why. The second design is pretty good, but may not address what you necessarily are wanting after a good discussion. Where I still have concern is what tubing will be used, as it has a profound effect on ride. A good builder will select tubing based on your weight, riding style, preferences, and the bike dimensions. This takes years of knowledge and experience, because tubing that is too heavy will lead to a stiff and uncomfortable ride, while too light a flexy flier that may break. Part of the magic of a custom steel bike is having tubing tuned to you.