there was some cool stuff in there. i like some of the camera angles, one thing that would help would be to make some sequences: on those shots at around 2:12 where the camera is sitting on the jump with the riders come right at it, shoot it from another angle too. When you're editing leave that shot in as the rider approaches then cut to the second angle just as he takes off. if you only have one camera just shoot the rider hitting the jump a few times.